Wednesday, November 9, 2011

Point Of View Story; TOM! :D

          It's 8:15 in the morning and I'm chilling in the hallway with Leslie. Sarah is over there staring at herself. She's kind of creepy. Oh no, she's staring at us now! She doesn't look too happy. Ouch ! People are constantly running into me! This hallway is so crowded. I know she wants me to ask her to homecoming but she's so creepy! Maybe I'll just ask Leslie, but that could cause drama. Leslie is so much prettier, and she simply has a better personality. Sarah on the other hand reminds me of my mother. So controlling! This is so confusing. Sarah looks so mad, but I like Leslie! Who should I choose? I don't want Sarah to make Leslie miserable just because I ask her to homecoming. It seems like my best choice would be to not choose anyone. Maybe I'll just go alone!

1 comment:

Mrs. Gibson said...

This is in 1st person POV, good. And WOW Tom has a lot of different thoughts running through his head.